I love the line “I felt like a huge presence, and yet the smallest thing in the universe all at once.” I really like the sense of hopefulness at the end, that the end is the beginning.
I felt a bit breathless reading this, captivated by the ebb and flow of thoughts and action. I loved this image: “I remember thinking that these were big thoughts. As if the expanse of the landscape gave my head more room to run.” And the pair of eyes in the mirror. And your choice to stop time with “Here.” And the ending. Haunting.
I love the line “I felt like a huge presence, and yet the smallest thing in the universe all at once.” I really like the sense of hopefulness at the end, that the end is the beginning.
Thank you for reading!
I felt a bit breathless reading this, captivated by the ebb and flow of thoughts and action. I loved this image: “I remember thinking that these were big thoughts. As if the expanse of the landscape gave my head more room to run.” And the pair of eyes in the mirror. And your choice to stop time with “Here.” And the ending. Haunting.
Thank you so much. What a great concept this project is.
Oh my!! How captivating throughout, this interior excavation, and intriguing at the end!!
Thank you, Andrea! It was really feeing to write from someone else's point of view.
Thank you, dear reader!