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Rosana Francescato's avatar

Wow, what a great story on so many levels, and beautifully written. I wasn't planning to spend time reading today, but your story drew me in and I couldn't stop. I may have to read it again, and I know it will stay with me. So many layers here.

Also, the part about not having her name on a building struck me. Just the other day I saw a social media post or some post on here, which I can't locate now, about how buildings used to be more beautiful and ornate because of patronage or governments putting lots of money into them, and how now, people donate to have their name put on a building, plus all those beautiful old buildings were built by exploited laborers.

So much more to your story than that, but it was interesting to see this come up again.

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TheUltraContemplative's avatar

This is such a masterful piece of work. The excitement, the anticipation of physical and emotional release was so well written in your beautiful descriptions of the shop, Lisa, and Celina. Nice touch bringing in her husband and his inputs. Great work here, friend.

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